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Comics - Jumping The Shark V2 (Page 1 of 34) - January 27th, 2012, 2:24 am

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mangazebra, January 27th, 2012, 2:33 am ( Reply )

Hello, I have some things to explain on smackjeeves

This is Jumping the Shark version 2

A couple of weeks ago I took 20ish pages offline so I could re-start the comic. I was scripting as I went along but it was leading to bad character building and a big mess. (even though I knew roughly what I wanted the story outcomes to be)

I was writing as I went along because thats how I wrote Best Day Ever. but the scene jumps and changes in this story are a completely different ball game. I was getting more and more unhappy with the script and I tried to fix as I went along but really I needed to change things from the beginning of the story. when I wasn't pleased with the story the artwork suffered from a lack of positive attitude and rushing pages.

so here it is.

Jumping the Shark V2 page 1 of 34

everything has been scripted before I started page 1. which was really important.

sorry about this. I know the original story had a couple of readers. Thanks to everyone who supported it in version 1 and everyone who supported my decision to start from scratch (it wasn't easy)


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